wake up dead
I am sitting on the railway station waiting for my train....
after all these years of work , responsibility , success and losses, love and hate, i am going back...
yes, back to home.I have got the retirement and now finally i can spend my time with my family at my home taht i have been longing for last 40 years.
at 20 i had to study.
at 30 i had to start my own biz
at 40 i had to expand my biz
at 50 i had to see biz goes global and social
and at 60 i must leave the organisation on itself for the next generation.
All these yrs. went as a flash and now i m standing here with white hair to rediscover myself, to recollect what i had left all these years.
i do miss my work but i am happy. happy because once again i m me.
all these years i was fiting for this day wen i m with me and now i m here.
Train must be coming.i m sitting on a chair raeding news of latest donations from my orgaisation.
ohh wats this?? thats a pain.its growing. like my heart id being pierced by a hot cane.wats taht light. a lite coming from a torch that is very powerful. i m blinded by it.......................................................................................................
where m i? oh here at the railway station. the train is here.
" hey Mr. Station master. wheres II tier AC S2??...."
"excuse me plz. wheres II tier AC s2??...."
what the hell is with these people. they dont listen.
"bhaisahab, ap bataenge S2 kis side hai?"
oh my God , everyone is so self involved.ok, ill better find it myself.
yups, there it is. and theres my berth.
oh crap!! i left my luggage.
.
.
.
.
there it is .
wats up with this suitcase y cant i lift it. thandle is not coming in my hand.
they are...they are...the are going thru my hand.
am i dreaming??!!!!
i think i shud ask that person with newspaper
"excuse me please can u please help me with my suitcase........excuse me"
OH NO!!!!!
wat is it....am i awake.........
that .....taht person is me!!!!!!!!
where the hell am i ?...i cant touch anything....
am i going crazy??!!!!
or
or
I M DEAD.
after all these years of work , responsibility , success and losses, love and hate, i am going back...
yes, back to home.I have got the retirement and now finally i can spend my time with my family at my home taht i have been longing for last 40 years.
at 20 i had to study.
at 30 i had to start my own biz
at 40 i had to expand my biz
at 50 i had to see biz goes global and social
and at 60 i must leave the organisation on itself for the next generation.
All these yrs. went as a flash and now i m standing here with white hair to rediscover myself, to recollect what i had left all these years.
i do miss my work but i am happy. happy because once again i m me.
all these years i was fiting for this day wen i m with me and now i m here.
Train must be coming.i m sitting on a chair raeding news of latest donations from my orgaisation.
ohh wats this?? thats a pain.its growing. like my heart id being pierced by a hot cane.wats taht light. a lite coming from a torch that is very powerful. i m blinded by it.......................................................................................................
where m i? oh here at the railway station. the train is here.
" hey Mr. Station master. wheres II tier AC S2??...."
"excuse me plz. wheres II tier AC s2??...."
what the hell is with these people. they dont listen.
"bhaisahab, ap bataenge S2 kis side hai?"
oh my God , everyone is so self involved.ok, ill better find it myself.
yups, there it is. and theres my berth.
oh crap!! i left my luggage.
.
.
.
.
there it is .
wats up with this suitcase y cant i lift it. thandle is not coming in my hand.
they are...they are...the are going thru my hand.
am i dreaming??!!!!
i think i shud ask that person with newspaper
"excuse me please can u please help me with my suitcase........excuse me"
OH NO!!!!!
wat is it....am i awake.........
that .....taht person is me!!!!!!!!
where the hell am i ?...i cant touch anything....
am i going crazy??!!!!
or
or
I M DEAD.
posted by vinal at 3:44 PM
9 Comments:
Well well...fiction writing, eh?
so u started this too..as in did u write that urself...
if u did, good, for i like the conception of the idea.
in anycase, nice read
:)
yaar i do write fiction.as for ur info, i have drafts of many ogf my short stories at home....
but this one is diff. its one of my latest concept of writing...the ugly writing....which u will get to know about in my later posts.
hmm...sounds exciting..well, in that case, lotsa appreciation again, and u know u have a reader waiting for ur coming posts...
even ugly is bful i guess
and ya, y dont u mail me ur drafts of short stories...plsssssssss
:)
i cany mail u the drafts as they are hand written....
and...they suck....
and u know wat? u hav just written yhe ttitle of mu next post...that i thot of many months ago...
"ügly is beatuful"
nicely thought of..some skill and this could have been a killer..sadly its not. come again..
who are u????
and who wants a killer??
Hey vinal, you have a great blog here! I'm definitely going to bookmark you!
I have a relationship tip site/blog.
101 Ways to Build Happy, Lasting Relationships at relationship tip - RelationshipAdviceGuide.com.
Motivate Each Other :Find a mutual incentive that will motivate both of you.
do you really care who am i?? does it matter??
and btw killer = bull's eye, no flaws, in short 'good'.
doesnt matter......
fine....i suck in writing
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